This draft really made me think differently about the short story I began with and it forced me to go back and really re-work it. Despite not really making use of the inner monolouge correctly, the prompt still suceeded in introducing a new way of telling the story.
-Alot of confusing sentences that need simplifying
-For the portfolio draft I plan to make even more drastic changes. Maybe write another 'chapter' to this story telling the same story through another characters eyes.
-I nailed the word requirement pretty effortlessly, didn't have much need for adding bullshit for the sake of length.
I think in the next draft I'm gonna attempt to tell the story from the security guards point of view. It'll be for the most part the same story. THe same things will happen. Certain things will differ, however, from what the lawyer sees because they percieve things differently.
Process memo: Draft 2: Makes me wonder
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