I’m pretty satisfied with my new draft of my Portfolio. I didn’t get many comments last time that gave me pointers on what to do to improve so that was kind of a bummer. Then again, at first I wasn’t giving very constructive comments either until the last part of class when Mr. Lowe kindly corrected me. So I had to go solo on this one.
I re-read my paper out loud to see what words didn’t flow with the voice and what I should change. I changed more in this paper than I have in the past for other drafts, so I’m proud of that. I really want to perfect this though and now that I’ve edited what I see fit, I’m hoping that my classmates or my peers around the dorm will help me out.
If you see anything you think I could rephrase or say in a better way, please let me know. I’m aiming to make this paper as perfect as I possibly can. I think all it really needs is some rephrasing here and there and a little bit of a grammatical tune up and it should be good to go. Thanks for your help guys and good luck on your final portfolios!
Process Memo, Portfolio Draft II
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