ENC 1101-B3 & B4: Writing for Discovery

Well, the “I’s” were every where. I noticed like 50 of them. So with the help of my group members I changed the majority of them. It made the story read a little better, without being interrupted with the character constantly saying “I”. It wasn’t as hard as I thought it would be. There still might be a few that I want to change for the final.

I also, had trouble with the present tense. Sometimes it just felt off using it. However, I am glad I attempted it. I like challenging myself to try different things. This was definitely something that I needed to work on and I tried my hardest. In the final draft I definitely would like to do one last check through of course.

I kept the ending as some what incomplete. One of my group members was totally blown away by the fact he didn’t know what the ending was. I never thought that that kind of ending would have such an effect on people, it was really neat. Another group member thought it was a great story. I love it when the readers enjoy reading my pieces, this hasn’t happened in quite a while, I can assure you.