ENC 1101-B3 & B4: Writing for Discovery

Not much new on this one. I just sort of finished the story up. i think that my ending may have been a little rushed. I could proabbly be more descriptive in my final draft. Overall I like my ending I don't think that it's that bad. I could use a little help with the wording, but I think I'll get it towards the end. I really like the way the story ends with the guy changing his lifestyle. I hate reading a story where nothing changes at the end. it really annoys me when everyone just goes back to the way that they were before you even read it.

i think that i might be able to be a little more descriptive in the ending of the story as weel. When he's climbing through the overhang part I could describe more of how the character is feeling. I could also describe more of the mountain. I’m debating whether or not I really wanna mess with interior dialogue or not. I don’t really know that much about it and I don’t really know how to use it. It could make my story either really good , or really bad.I’ll have a lot of changes in my next draft.