I guess I've just had a stroke of luck with this paper. I sat to write it and again all these new ideas just started flooding my brain. I guess it pays not look at the thing for awhile. It felt as though I had a new perspective.
The only problem with that perspective is that I don't know if it works or not. I tried to experiment with my las revision by deleting the journal entry section of the paper and replace it with a form of "stream of consciousness". I put it all in the form of a dream, but what I'm afraid of is that the reader might not catch that it is a dream. They might think that my character has schiztophrenia or something cause I personally know that the section is complicated, but I also think that it adds to style and feel of the entire story.
I dunno that was my only concern. I made a couple slight adjustments with tense and all but they were no big deal. I just hope I can get some good feed back on this portfolio draft revison.
Process Memo-Portfolio Draft 1
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