Process Memo For Portfolio Draft 1
In this draft I switched the tense back to the past. I liked the way the first draft sounded. I also like the way it sounded with me being able to narrate the story in the 3rd person so I changed that too. I tried to introduce the problem at first so that you would know something was wrong from the beginning. I am not sure if I did a good job in doing it because I didn’t give much detail about it. I didn’t want to reveal to much though, just wanted to introduce something at the beginning. I wanted it to some of the middle at the start then bring it back in the story, without revealing much. I could use another idea on how to make the story better since it still seems like it needs more. I will probably to reveal some more about the characters next draft. I just waned to get this one out with the intro being part of the middle and the tense changed back to the way the original story was. I have two more drafts to change up a few things so now that I have a foundation of what my final draft will look like it will be easier. I know how it is going to be written and in what person and all that I just need to revise it some more.
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