Short story draft 3 "The Loan" process memo
i wasnt really sure what to do for this draft since i was more or less satisfied with my second draft and it was also well above the one thousand word requirement. i looked a little closer and realized there were some small changes i could make that would change my paper for the better even still. i tried to add a lot more internal narration so the reader was more aware of what the main character may have been thinking. i also tried to take a little bit of the "I's" out. im not sure how successful i was at this though because it is a difficult process when you are writing your paper in third person. i added some more detail so the reader can more vividly see the scene or the character for themselves rather me just telling them.
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