ENC 1101-B3 & B4: Writing for Discovery

I love writing creative stories! It was a lo harder though. Writing a story in first person is kind of challenging because you have to put yourself in the chracters shoes. I had to think to myself what would I be feeling if I was in this chraceters shoes. I liked this draft a lot because I think I did a better job of explainng my character. You actually gt to understand where he was coming from. I also liked this draft because I put more action into it. It show more of what the chracters doing at the time the story takes place

Their are a few things that I wasn't to keen on about this draft. I still can't find a way to make my writing read smoothly. When I read my paper it just doesn't sound like something that a writer would write. I also feel that I ended the story kind of abrubtly. Their is still alot left to talk about. I feel that I've left the reader unfulfilled because the story doesn't really have an ending.I also failed to include the name of the chracter in this story, but I don't think that it's really that important.I htink that by the time that the final draft is due this should be a pretty good paper