Process memo
When writing this draft I was trying to tell the reader about a story in my life that changed who I was and that helped develop me as a man. I thought a while about Maybe making up some kind of story about a space cadet or something cool like that. Then I thought you know writing a story about some make believe character wouldn’t keep the collage reader interested. I figured the next best thing to do is tell a story about me and what I went through but I need to change it up a little to make it fiction instead of the truth. If I can do this I think my classmates will rather read that than some make believe story about a boy who loses his dog. I made many revisions on the second draft. Mr. Lowe informed me that we were supposed to write about something that was fiction. He said I should keep the story close the to the same topics. I changed all the names in the story and switched up the people I talked to, just to try and make the story more on the fiction side. I think the plot is pretty good so I don’t want to lose that so just changing up a few things should give it about the right amount of fiction Mr. Lowe is looking for. I also changed it from 3rd person to 1st person.
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