Process Memo - Exploratory D Second Draft
Written by jnm1485 on November 18, 2003 - 09:37
I really didn't like his one as much as I did the vision of my second. I enjoyed so much more telling the story in thrid person rather than first person. I wasn't able to capture the flashbacks when writing in present tense which i think takes away from my story. Otherwise, I think that I did well at what I did.