I thought I posted this on Friday along with my essay but the Internet was on the blink as usual and it looks like it didn't happen. So here it is for a second time...
I had a different perception of what I wanted to do with this short story coming into the assignment. But when I started writing it turned out to be less of a short story and more a small chapter of something larger. Really all this essay is, is two guys walking down a hallway talking. Like I said though, coming into the assignment I had a grander plan. Because of how this piece turned out it really doesn't have an ending or even a strong beginning for that matter.
-I need to do something with the beginning to make the slowness that follows more bearable.
-I need to pull together the ending with something more concrete, that sums up what I’m trying to say.
-This won’t be easy because I’m not even entirely sure what I’m trying to say.
-Some confusing sentences exist in the paper that need to be clarified.
-Short stories usually have some sort of message or underlying theme. I need to make mine more evident.
-This is hard because I feel like I’m going to need more then 1,000 words to do this.
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Process Memo: Makes me wonder
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