I think that I was able to capture what I wanted the story to do very well. Honestly though, the story itself is very long, almost 1800 words. I tried to keep it from being so long but it seemed like I couldn't or I would lose to much. I really enjoyed writing this story and I think that I will enjoy doing this one over the Exploratory C. I wanted to tell a story that could have happened and not totally "out there" fiction. All of the dates and even the weather are true in the story. I was able to do some research about the Battle of Britain in which the story is based. All of the facts about the time it started and the dates it lasted too are all real facts.
I think that I have all I will need for the second draft, I just need to get my organization down and also add some details here and there to make it complete.
Process Memo - Exploratory D First Draft
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