ENC 1101-B3 & B4: Writing for Discovery
Process Memo for "ka's Adventure"
Written by adp03f on November 13, 2003 - 16:11
For this exploratory I found it really easy to write, but it took me awhile to come up with something I could write about. But i really like the idea for my story. I know I ended it kind of awkward but it's because next time when I work with it, I'm going to keep going with it so it might not make sense right now.

I need a little help with if it is interesting or not. I have this idea for the story but the beginning has to be kind of boring to make it work right. I really don't know what else to say about it because my thoughts on the story are not done yet so I don't know how well it is working yet. But I think with the direction I'm going in it will be an effective story.

I really don't know what else to say about it, but I like my ideas. But if you have any ideas for making it better feel free to give me any advice that would be great!
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Re: Kat
Posted by cel4145 on November 16, 2003 - 17:27.
Okay. The real conflict in the story begins when we find out that Kat likes dance but is interested in the soccer tryouts. Up until that point, Kat sounds like lots of other girls seriously interested in dance, or something similar. Know what I mean?

So up until then seems mostly backstory. I would start with from the point about soccer and dance; build that up and add in, as you need it, the backstory that you included in the beginning.