This paper was a neat experience and I hope that with some revision I can make this into a great story. I didn’t really have any good ideas for this paper but once I sat down to write it they all followed. I have a hard time with the transition and organization but in this paper I think that the Longman Handbook has helped me out a lot in the last few weeks.
I hope to use this paper for my portfolio draft and maybe for my final grade so I will really be revising it. When I write a paper I really have a hard time with the introduction but in this paper I tried just to sit down and write whatever came out instead of planning an introduction and trying to make it work. The only problems that I really ran into this paper were the ideas and trying to make it s creative story. When I was running out of ideas I would just think about if I was running around in a haunted house and what I would think was happening. This class has opened up a lot of opportunities for me and the way that I will expand my writing. I have never had to write a creative story before this.
