ENC 1101-B3 & B4: Writing for Discovery
Witchy
Written by tmtollerton on November 7, 2003 - 15:14
This was so unbelievably long! I wrote it at work because I was bored and it up taking up the majority of my day. Since, I'm not going to be here the majority of next week, I decided I might want to get it done because I also have a religion paper that I needed to get done. Thinking ahead always helps.
I think the ending is extremely cheesy. I like it up until probably the fourth page. It just got to the point where I was just typing words. It's close to 1800 words and that twice as much as we needed. So I apologize to my group members and anyone else who reads it. It's a cute, cheesy story so at least it's entertaining. That would really suck if it were long and boring. However, it could be more detailed. At some parts it doesn't grab the readers attention. I put a few twists and turns but it ends really bluntly. I want it to end gracefully seeing as how Brenna doesn’t show one act of gracefulness.
I like the story and I hope you all do too. Tell me what can be cut and what needs to be expanded.
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Re: witchy
Posted by cel4145 on November 16, 2003 - 23:16.
"I think the ending is extremely cheesy." Not cheesy, but maybe too much of a trick ending. Everything was believable, in it's own way, until then. But I think you understimate the rest of it.

You might consider then an ending which gives insight into the characters rather than one that tries to bring the plot together so much. You don't have to have it all tied up at the end in a nice neat package.