Okay I have lots of questions to ask about my paper. Of course, I procrastinated to the last minute so it may seem a little thrown together. For the next draft, I plan on researching a little bit more on the subject of abortion. This will help incorporate Ethos into my paper because the reader will understand more from where I am coming from and acknowledge my credibility.
For my opening (the phone call between Alyse and I), is it too long? I wanted it to seem rather emotional. Did you get that effect? Also, can you understand why my view changed and is that a good way to show that?
I added my reasoning for many of the reasons why I believe may call for an abortion. Does his reasoning make sense? If I confused you in any way, let me know please!
In my next draft, I plan on elaborating more on each reason on why I sometimes believe abortion is acceptable. When I read over my draft now, I realize that I should look up the health risks because that paragraph seems quite short.
Is my ending okay? Should I change it in any way? What could I write in order to make it leave a lasting impression? Should I incorporate Alyse’s phone call into it at all?
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