The three appeals
Written by rah03c on October 22, 2003 - 20:22
In Ede’s chapter I was introduced to logos, pathos, and ethos for the fist time. According to Aristotle, “when speakers and writers communicate with others, they draw on these three general appeals.” Logos appeals to reason, Pathos appeals to emotion, and Ethos to the credibility of the speaker or writer. In the reading two college students were each asked to write an essay on their majors using these three techniques.

Of the two essays in the reading I think that Tova Johnson’s, the essay on biology, was the better of the two when it comes to the use of logos. She shows the readers her progression of her interest in biology as a child, by giving the reader a specific example of her and her sister playing with an anthill in the back yard. This to me was a good example, because it showed me as the reader good reason for her decision in choosing biology as her major.

I feel that Brandon Barrett, in his essay, used Pathos better than what Tova. In he expresses the relief and confidence he felt when he final decided his major. I guess I chose this because I can relate to this to this situation. I did have as hard of a choice as Brandon in deciding become a chemistry major but it was a relief when I chose a business major.

When it comes to my writing I couldn’t really say which of these three general appeals I use most or prefer to use. I have never really paid to much attention to it in the past. Now that I am aware of what they are I try to pick up on which one it is. I think the factor that will predict which one was used most will be my rhetorical situation
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Now we know
Posted by nolegurle22 on October 23, 2003 - 15:08.
Yeah, I agree with you when it comes to the two students in Ede's chapter on writing on who wrote better in their papers on their majors. It kind of puts things into perspective to show you that everyone writes differently, but not necessarily badly just because they are different.
You said that you weren't sure which one of the "logos, pathos, and ethos" related to your writing style the best. I'm sure if you looked over some of your work, you could figure it out quite easily. I would say that I'm more of a pathos writer because I tend to put a lot of my heart into what I write, simply a lot of feelings and thoughts.
Were in the same boat...
Posted by Andrea00 on October 23, 2003 - 14:49.
I think that from now on i will be more aware of these three concepts when writing my papers from now on also. Its funny how just a simple reading can sometimes make a huge difference onto how you view your standards as a writer. I know it definitely changed mine!
Questions?
Posted by Bixby150 on October 23, 2003 - 14:47.
What do you think about the ethos in the sample essays? Why is Brandon’s essay worst when it comes to the appeal of logos and also why is Tova’s essay worst when it comes to the appeal of pathos? And what do you think about the pathos, logos, and ethos in the pictures?
Not After, but Before...
Posted by lms03n on October 23, 2003 - 12:07.
"Now that I am aware of what they are I try to pick up on which one it is."

Instead of picking up on one or more of the three appeals after writing your paper, why don't you simply use the three appeals to form you paper? By continuously understanding that adding Logos, Pathos, and Ethos can form a great paper; you should definitely use them when brainstorming and writing a work.
Nice structure
Posted by tmtollerton on October 23, 2003 - 11:30.
I must say your paragraph structure is excellent. I like the way that you broke down each general appeal. I also like the way that you analyzed which writer used them correctly. I agree with the your logos analyzation, Johnson did write use it better. Using examples to appeal to the audience is always a plus!

Taylor Tollerton
Good
Posted by mebanite05 on October 23, 2003 - 11:28.
"This to me was a good example, because it showed me as the reader good reason for her decision in choosing biology as her major."

I whole heartedly agree with you when you say this, but i also think that Tova appeals to Pathos because she kind of makes you think of your own childhood and why you choose your major. But that's just me.

"I did have as hard of a choice as Brandon in deciding become a chemistry major but it was a relief when I chose a business major."

This has nothing to do with the topic but i just wanted to let you know that this can be incoherent because it kind of looks like you are talking about you being a chemistry major, i had to kind of read it twice to get twice.
 
Sorry
Posted by rah03c on October 23, 2003 - 13:32.
when i wrote
"I did have as hard of a choice as Brandon in deciding become a chemistry major but it was a relief when I chose a business major."
it was ment to be
"I didn't have as hard of a choice as Brandon did in deciding my major but it was a relief when I chose a business major." i was just trying to let people know that i had been in the same predicament as brandon when it comes to the relief you feel after you have decided your major.
 
I know
Posted by mebanite05 on October 27, 2003 - 16:55.
Yeah i know man, i was just telling you that it was a little incoherent. No big deal.